Saddle Up Saloon: Thrush Travels

The poem below was written for Colleen’s double ennead challenge No. 6. The Double Ennead comprises five lines with a syllable count of 6/5/11/6/5, (33 SYLLABLES per stanza) 3 STANZAS EACH = 99 SYLLABLES, NO MORE, NO LESS! During this month, poets were challenged to use the image below to compose their poetry (ekphrastic poetry).

Lone thrush flies with the breeze,

floats in the wind’s song,

wavers and shivers at the sound of thunder,

calms at the sky’s blue folds

and their white patches.


Lone thrush flies with the breeze,

looks for life in hills,

stills at the urgent cries of pouncing eagles,

rubs wings with a goldfinch,

croons with small songbirds.


Lone thrush flies with the breeze,

stares at earth’s colors

flies to join golden finch in the red maple,

cuts into samara

finds home in lush warmth.

22 thoughts on “Saddle Up Saloon: Thrush Travels

  1. Oh, I only knew the maple seedlings as ‘helicopters’. Since when they fall that’s what they look like.
    Thanks for the new word. I did see two goldfinch yesterday… I hope there are also some thrushes near by 😀

  2. Pingback: Saddle-Up Saloon Double Ennead Challenge No. 6, Recap – Colleen M. Chesebro

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