“Was this the mail you were reading?” the young lieutenant passed a letter to Henry.
“Thank you,” Henry took it and wondered if he was expected to salute the lieutenant
The lieutenant hesitated, “I found this under the wires. It probably fell from your pocket.” Henry looked at the bruises in the lieutenant’s hands where the barbed wires had cut him. He took the crumpled photo of his girlfriend. “Thank you,” he said, quietly.
The lieutenant saluted him and walked away. Henry stared at his back, then walked back to his tent to join the other prisoners of war.
This was written for the Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Challenge. In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes a sugar report. Use its original meaning of a letter from a sweetheart to a soldier, or invent a new use for it. Go where the prompt leads!
I didn’t expect that twist, Padmini. Well done!
Thanks a lot, Charli
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Beautiful take on the prompt!! ❤
Thank you, Liz, for stopping by and I am glad you liked this one.
I was not expecting the last three words. Nicely done!!! xo
You find kindness and empathy in unexpected places, isn’t it? Thank you for the visit, Amy. xo