The Girl Jul24 A girl – Her words prick like thorn vulnerable liquid eyes deny Rate this:Share this:SharePrintEmailRedditTwitterLinkedInFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
wanted to write a haiku.. but will call this just ‘three line poetry’, as it does not have the rhythm or syllable count Reply
A girl –A girl –
What does her liquid eyes deny?
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Hi Yoshiko, I guess they deny her own words. What do you think? It is open to interpretation
Her liquid eyes show of not being listened to
I like that line: “vulnerable liquid eyes deny”.
Thank you so much for the comment:)
wanted to write a haiku.. but will call this just ‘three line poetry’, as it does not have the rhythm or syllable count
precision!!!
Thanks so much:)
Children are like that aren’t they 🙂
So sad; yet so true for so many! 🙂
xoxoxo