Who is ‘Moon’?


His mind clouds with serious thoughts

and uneasiness, like that of a court poet,

when he looks at the slippery moon.

Some he had compared to the guiding star,

flattered a few as the brightest star

and likened others to the luminous star, but to whom

did he confer the title of moon? Ah! He had to find out

before the prom, for she was

to be his partner

Written for Ermilia’s Picture it & Write

14 thoughts on “Who is ‘Moon’?

    • Thank you very much, Robyn:) Thought of this just before I went to sleep and typed it in a hurry. This is because I tend to forget words the next day:)) Just a free style poem and so glad you liked it. Wish you a happy Easter and peaceful weekend

  1. Thanks, nightlake! I really enjoyed your story too. I like how you used the words luminous, guiding, and brightest star to describe the moon. Great choices! Thanks for contributing this week. 🙂

    – Ermisenda

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