Emotions hidden
in cast down eyes,
stiff posture,
and still hands,
but given away
by the shy trembling lips
while trying to stop
the surge of words
as deep as the
unblemished ocean
Emotions hidden
in cast down eyes,
stiff posture,
and still hands,
but given away
by the shy trembling lips
while trying to stop
the surge of words
as deep as the
unblemished ocean
Private moments of love as thoughts tremble, tease and commune in body language.
Glad you like the poem. Thank you
lovely sharing Dear!
It is an imaginary poem..and thank you so much for the appreciation, Soumya
That’s so quietly intense. A beautiful poem 🙂
Thanks so much, Sarah
Each word is speaking to me. Beautiful…
Hi, thank you very much
Beautiful.
Thanks a lot for visiting and leaving so many likes on my blog
Oh, very romantic, Padmini….
“but given away
by the shy trembling lips.”
How true and sweet these words…
Thank you so much, Carolyn, for your kind words:) but I am much more comfortable in the genre of nature writing. Hope you had a god weekend. Still busy with dancing?
Yes, Thank You, Padmini; the weekend was very good indeed.
The first comp is coming up in a few weeks, so yes, we are quite busy… and enjoying it immensely…!
Here’s hoping your weekend was a good one too…!?! 🙂
Yes, mine was fine. Thank you, Carolyn:) ballroom dancing, right? Is it an international comp?
No, Padmini, it’s an Australian National Comp to be held in the Jupiters Casino in the state of Queensland. This will be the fifth time we’ve competed at this particular event. We enjoy this one immensely…!
sounds nice. good luck to your team:)
Thank You…. xoxoxo
Human Emotions are potent forces indeed. You harness their energy well, while awakening them in your readers.
Excellent!
~kp
Hi Kp, Thank you very much for returning and the kind words of appreciation on this post. Cheers, Nightlake
A beautiful poem about love.
Thank you very much, Mary
…first love… Great poem.
Hi, Thank you very much:)
fabulously captured suppressed feelings that give away via small things.
Thank you so much, Sharmishtha:)
Oh my ~ so passionate – so real it felt! Amazing work ~ x RL
Thank you kindly, Robyn:) Thanks so much for the encouragement and happy you visited:)
Nai’shhhhhhhhhh….po’emmmmm… i like it 🙂
Glad you like it. Thanks a lot
🙂