Friday Fictioneers – Erika

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Erika hurried back after her violin class, as the lights in her apartment staircase were switched off by 11 PM. However, it was too late and the lights had been turned off. It was exactly at the same time that the most wanted thief, Ren, stealthily made an appearance. He had already studied the apartment details and decided that he was going to loot the tenth floor house. As Ren moved to the staircase, he came face to face with a woman. While she smiled at him, his mouth dropped open in fear. His shocked mind remembered her pictures in the apartment’s association office. She was Erika Mori, the renowned violinist, killed in the 1945 bombings.

Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers and Jennifer Pendergast for this lovely photo.

52 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – Erika

  1. Brilliant! I was right there. Your words vivid and clear building up to an exciting climax! What an outstanding read! I loved it. (you may have gathered that lol!) 🙂

  2. You know, this story is really a clever idea. A ghost story when we least expected it.
    However, it could use a little editing. The grammar and punctuation are not quite right, so it reads slightly clumsily. Please take another look at it, and see if you can clean it up a bit. Then re publish it. I do this all the time with my stories. I am always late getting the prompt and I am too hasty publishing my story. So I fix it and re-publish it. I hope you don’t mind this….

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