Just the first key here
to open doors of wisdom
Rest are illusions,
tempting us towards a path
of darkness with no foothold
Written for Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.
Just the first key here
to open doors of wisdom
Rest are illusions,
tempting us towards a path
of darkness with no foothold
Written for Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.
I like this one a great deal, not only do I have a personal affinity towards the key, but your words paired beautifully with it.
Benjamin
Glad you can relate to this, Benjamin. Thank you very much
This is really good!
Thanks a lot:)
Nicely done!
Thank you so much:) about to read yours:)
Great impression from the other two keys!
Yes:) Thank you, Anne
Like. Like. Like. 🙂
Hi Roxi, Thank you for liking this:)
wise truth!
Thank you, Sharmishtha:)
Wow. I love the final line, a darkness with no footholds. A powerful piece with so much to say. Thanks for contributing this week, nightlake!
– Ermisenda
Thanks so much, Ermilia, for the kind comments..this week’s picture was really intriguing
love how you wrote about the other keys! wonderfully written. and a beautiful last line.
Thank you so much, kz:)
The Key to wisdom – beautiful metaphor 🙂
lol. Thanks so much:)
Reminds me of the temptations at the garden of eden. 🙂
Thank you on behalf of Daylight Tune Ministry for liking our poetry ‘Character’. 🙂
Would like to read that. Thank you so much for dropping by
You are welcome. Your poetry is also beautiful. 🙂
Well written and enlightening as well, my friend!
Happy Friday and cheers!! 😀
Thank you so much:)
You’re welcome, my friend!
Do write more whenever you are free to do so..hehe…
Happy Monday and Cheers!! 😀