For the Love of Haiku Jan26 The toy world talks, Mocks and laughs at us, We, the naïve and the oblivious This was written for the love of haiku Rate this:Share this:SharePrintEmailRedditTwitterLinkedInFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
What if they are observing our movements and talking about us:) Thank you so much for the kind words Reply
Fun on the surface…but can be scary too – that’s the way I see it, though might not be the intent of the poet. Reply
yes, it is meant to be fun..but unbelievable and even scary if you think deeply of it:) Thank you for the comment:) Reply
great job…
Thank you so much
Tinkerbell lets us imagine any kind of mischief we desire.
Very smart and well adept haiku 🙂 Thanks NightLake! xoxo
Thank you, Dolly:) and glad you liked it
yes, would you like to try? or may be Meme would be more interested:)
Reblogged this on allaboutlemon.
Thank you for the reblog:)
Your haiku is so rich – love the rhythm, love that ”pause” in the 3rd line…and so true.
Thank you ever so much, Pirate
As they should! Succinct and impressive as usual.
Hi Ken, Thank you for this. Hope you had a nice weekend
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From one oblivious to another…
Excellent, succinct, surreal. Love the idea of toys talking.
What if they are observing our movements and talking about us:) Thank you so much for the kind words
nice image ..toys speak! 🙂
Hi, Soumya, Thank you:)
Wow.. The third line speaks on so many different levels! Nicely done.
Hi, Glad you enjoyed it:) and thanks so much..
Fun on the surface…but can be scary too – that’s the way I see it, though might not be the intent of the poet.
yes, it is meant to be fun..but unbelievable and even scary if you think deeply of it:) Thank you for the comment:)
true words!
yes, in a way it is true, isn’t it? Thank you very much
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