Picture it & Write: A New Day

picture it and write


The bath is my confession

and the water my worship

where I wash away my sins

committed deliberately or without

Clean the wound inflicted by others

The dirt of my mind

over that of my body

and draw strength

for the entire day

Share your story, poem, Haiku or thoughts in Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.

33 thoughts on “Picture it & Write: A New Day

  1. Wow. Such a purity of thought when you call the water worship and bath your confession. I like the way it flows and ends with drawing strength from it. Something so calming and spiritual about it.

  2. I love how you compared the water to purity. A powerful image when comparing to “dirtiness” of our sins/negative thoughts. Great descriptive choices. Thanks for contributing to Picture it & write this week! 🙂

    – Ermisenda

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