Oh, you can try Haiku in open:) You may use the traditional form of three lines and 5-7-5 syllables or the modern form..I don’t follow traditional form…and thank you so much for the bookmark:)
Oh I just love this one, love it – it really speaks to me personally. Love it also as it has resonances of one I did about ho chi minh,not similar, jut tiny echoes. This one was masterful though. I feel like I really understood it personally – and your depth and breadth as a poet is something I appreciate very much – you ain’t a poet or hajin fixated on love, or nature, you go places with your words, and I like that very much.
The military and the militant – one fighting for the country and the other for a cause..both do not know if they will see the sunlight..the thought inspired this poem..and thank you so much for the kind words. You are very generous with appreciation..
Lovely and powerful words.
Thank you so much. much appreciate your comment
I never could write a haiku. Well, maybe I never tried. I bookmarked the site and maybe will try (in secret)
Oh, you can try Haiku in open:) You may use the traditional form of three lines and 5-7-5 syllables or the modern form..I don’t follow traditional form…and thank you so much for the bookmark:)
Oh I just love this one, love it – it really speaks to me personally. Love it also as it has resonances of one I did about ho chi minh,not similar, jut tiny echoes. This one was masterful though. I feel like I really understood it personally – and your depth and breadth as a poet is something I appreciate very much – you ain’t a poet or hajin fixated on love, or nature, you go places with your words, and I like that very much.
The military and the militant – one fighting for the country and the other for a cause..both do not know if they will see the sunlight..the thought inspired this poem..and thank you so much for the kind words. You are very generous with appreciation..
Hi Padmini,
I’ve invited you on a ‘coffee date’… Hope you can come…!
http://abcofspiritalk.wordpress.com/2013/01/08/coffee-anyone/
Thank you for the invite, Carolyn:) yes, I am in:)
Excellent poem by far….I like this a lot. 🙂
Surprise! New poem.
http://charliezero1.wordpress.com/2013/01/07/watching-crows-squirt-yellow-mustard-on-those-lollipop-anorexic-holocausts/
Thank you! just read yours..very insightful
I have never tried haiku either but love everything you do!
Thank you very much, LuAnn
Just excellent, thank you for sharing 🙂
Thank you for the kind comment
fabulous one padmini!
Thank you very much..this was heartfelt
Wonderful & poignant!
Thank you for the kind comment