The fashion model jumped into the boat, her gleaming red hair flying with the wind. She leaned gracefully against the table with a sullen smile. Instructed by her photographer, Jas, she now lay down, her curls in the ground. Jas was not satisfied with her expression. Their entourage moved to the studio where she posed elegantly. Brooding, Jas clicked away randomly.
He edited all his photographs, looking for something. She just did not have the natural smile or poise, he thought. She is not an actress, just a model. He suddenly stopped with a photo. “This is the perfect shot I wanted” he said aloud. She was sporting a natural smile, her red hair slightly ruffled in the wind, eyes animated, apparently chatting with someone. But what was she wearing? A faded jeans and a plain white shirt! She held something very tightly – the pay cheque. Jas smiled, deleted the photo and walked out of the office.
This is an entry for the Ermilia’s Picture it & Write.
Hahah… Loved that..! 🙂
A ‘natural’ shot is always best for me, too….! 🙂
Thank you, Carolyn:) enjoyed yours..was very romantic:)
Good one… enjoy it..
Thank you so much:) Happy you enjoyed this
lol great job^^ i smile quite broadly too when i get hold of the pay cheque lol ^^
lol. Don’t we all? Thank you so much, KZ..
lovely and intelligent!
Thanks a lot, Soumya. Are you interested in taking part too?
Oh! I too did! just posted few hrs back.
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Thanks a lot for the nomination, Soumya:)
welcome! 🙂
Very good!
Thank you very much for the kind comment..
Very subtle and clever!
Thank you very much, Pirate..did not take the romantic note this time:) Hope it is apt..Yours was different and made a nice reading too..
this is amazing padmini! loved the vivid picture you created of the scene.
Thank you so much, Sharmishtha..no poem this time:)
Natural is always more beautiful than made up. Great post.
yes, it is for sure..thank you very much for the comment..
Awesome write.:)
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Thank you:) Sure I just commented your latest post:)
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cute story…
Thank you!
Love it. Sometimes when you try to hard, it comes out looking or feeling forced. This was a perfect example of that.
yes, that is very true..a natural shot is always the best. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.
Sure gets the point across!
Thanks a lot, June