Soft flakes melt on the plant’s skin
just like how your honeyed words
melt my agitated soul
I want to be that young leaf
that takes your icy surface,
warms your inner self,
melts with you
and falls with you to the ground
Soft flakes melt on the plant’s skin
just like how your honeyed words
melt my agitated soul
I want to be that young leaf
that takes your icy surface,
warms your inner self,
melts with you
and falls with you to the ground
Beautiful With the fragility of the very first snowflakes.
the snow seems all the more beautiful when you have never seen it in person. Thank you so much:)
Oh, I felt every word… Tumble, tumble, gently falling…..
that’s indeed a very kind compliment. Thank you, Carolyn
Oh I do like this…
Thank you so much for the appreciating this poetry:)
Oooh so gentle so soft so beautiful
Thank you very much, Boomie:)
Wow, it’s really beautiful!!!
Thanks a lot:)
You have used the leaf cleverly and
with an elegant simplicity.
Thank you, Ken:) I am so very glad you liked this poem
so full of promises! beautiful ones.
anyone having problem with loading jpg files in posts? i am not even being allowed an option to upload one since yesterday.
thank you so much, Sharmishtha..did you check if you’ve exceeded the upload limit?
not even 0% of the upload limit has been used in some of the blogs!
oh ok..are you using firefox or IE? You may want to leave it today and try again tomorrow…maybe it would work tomorrow…
it did it yesterday, then it is doing it again today! its not funny any more!
Great flow and emotion. Looking forward to your posts! 🙂 Eric
Thank you very much, Eric