The wild wind goads the faded leaves
from the safety of the grassland
to the busy road
The traveling milkman
whistles carelessly
letting the wind make
a new path for his cycle
Busy commuters forget
their mechanical schedule
to take a momentary peak at
the trees dancing with abandon
Nice…like the idea and image of the tree dancing with abandon. Very well done!!
Thank you, Boomie:)
A nice ride towards another state of mind.
Thank you for visiting again, Ken. Glad you liked the poem
words that conjure up a picture… love it…
There is nothing like the beauty of nature to conjure a picture:) happy that you enjoyed this
Beautiful imagery..! 🙂
Hi Carolyn, Thanks a lot:))
You beautifully,taken us with you, nice flow of thoughts , wonderful!
very glad that you liked this song:) Thank you very much, Land of Fun.
I love windy days. There’s something reckless and joyful about them, at least for me.
yes, for me too..they make you forget yourself for a while. Thank you for the comment:)
just loved it padmini. the trees look so lovely when they dance in wind.
Thank you, Sharmishtha. Yes, they really do:)
i love wind and all its effects 🙂
sound, feelings and visual.
last line just rocks..loved it
Hi Soumya, so glad you liked it. Thank you so much and wish you a very happy weekend
Nice poem. Your words captures the essence of life!
Thank you very much, Tina
Lovely read, thank you!
Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts on this poem!
Amazing imagination for a poem.l liked it a lot.Jalal
I am glad you enjoyed it..and thank you very much for the visit.