The girl stood alone in her balcony
Solitude for company
When she heard a loud whisper
She did not turn
Lost in her thoughts
She heard a piercing scream
And she did not flinch
Then she saw a white mist
Against the dark night
She touched it with a sad smile
A vacant look in her eyes
The ghost flew away, disappointed
She neither belonged to the lively humans
Nor with the dead spirits
She was a human body
With emotions dead
I like the poem. The concept is good 🙂
Glad to know that you like it. Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts.
Wonderfully written poem!
Thanks a lot, Wendell
Another lovely but sad write – the last lines are very strong, well done! ~ Julie
Thanks, Julie. Some of the poems just end up reflecting some sadness, I guess..
Fantastic! Emotionally charged with a flavor of mystical — loved it nightlake 🙂
Thanks a lot, Robyn:)
most welcome 🙂